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Comments from baller16
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-08-19 21:17:15 | thanks for the comments everybody. man, this is definitely not my best work. I am a much better writer than that now, but I don't write erotica anymore. hopefully one day I'll get a story published and people can read it and see how my writing has evolved. until then, enjoy the story :) | |
| 2009-07-25 20:57:31 | The Interview_(0) | I liked it. There was no BS, there was no guy stroking his own ego(most likely because a female wrote it), the plot and setting was completely straightforward, and you didn't only write about one aspect of the situation. And even though you didn't get into the guy's point of view too much, you still let people understand his point of view. |
| 2009-12-02 14:59:58 | Shortcuts are always the best -- Part I | I like your style because you make it about the characters and the story and not about yourself, and it has a very natural feel to it. This story was hot without being cheesy too, which is important. Definitely keep writing. |