| 2019-08-12 20:40:15 |
The Forlorn Lovers_(1)
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very well written. I read this story years ago and still come back to reread it once in while. I have to admit this is one of the stories that inspire me to write my own. Do you mind taking a look at mine? |
| 2019-08-12 20:54:27 |
Mulligan
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I never understand how people find stories that drag on for paragraphs after paragraphs without any real plot, interesting. Don't get me wrong, your story does have its pros but it seems to me that some people on this site really favor stories that feature old fat men and under aged girls. 14 really? The walking back and forth, in and out of the house to get more drinks was boring enough. Now the readers have to imagine a 14 year old girl getting it on with an old perverted man too. It seems like in order to get high rating and comments, one has to write about perverted old men because most readers here are. "screw the plot, just give us something under age that we can jerk off too. " i love this site. Many writers are incredible and inspiring. But it's getting more and more difficult now to avoid stories like yours. At the very least make her 18 for god sake. Read 80k times and 160+ upvotes for this? is everyone of them from old men? |
| 2019-08-15 18:33:34 |
Megan's adventures part 1
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Hi, i really enjoy your story, Megan (assuming that's your name). Do you mind having a read at my story. I'm currently working on another story and looking for a collaborating partner. |