| 2022-09-03 22:28:39 |
Noelle’s Tentacle Gains, Part 2
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You have a lot of talent, I hope to read more of your writing. |
| 2023-07-02 02:00:45 |
Golden Lust Ch.01
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Great story, really got me going! Dialog and story were right and you captured Dan's excitement. I also write about pee/watersports, would like to know what you think of mine. |
| 2023-08-03 18:03:37 |
Family Secrets 1
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Wow, great first story! I hope to see more from you. |
| 2023-08-09 14:05:23 |
The Bridge Club Part 1, Etta and My First Time, Final Version, Episode 1
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Great story, especially if it's your first. I look forward to reading part II |
| 2023-11-11 00:11:31 |
Embrace the darkness Chapter 1
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Very well written story. You were able to keep the excitement building and there was a thread of eroticism throughout. I look forward to reading the next installment. |