| 2011-06-05 11:00:20 |
The day my little sister became a slut.
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Very poorly written. Dialogue was bad, story was short and didn't really describe anything. Just a bad story. |
| 2011-06-05 22:42:27 |
Siblings Discover True Love
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It's really just an overly long story. It sounds like you really needed to talk about some of the bad things that happened to you, and this site just really isn't the place for that. I was only able to read up until the assault in the locker room with the stiletto, and I lost all interest because I came here looking for sex stories, not stories about childhood trauma. I'm sorry so many bad things have happened to you, and I'm happy you've found love, but this just isn't the venue to air that sort of laundry. |
| 2011-06-20 13:31:45 |
Amy's first time with Anal as a bonus
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Pretty stupid story. |
| 2011-07-06 23:10:02 |
The Darkroom
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Really great story. A few, minor grammatical errors, but nothing major. Can't wait to read more! |
| 2011-07-06 23:10:10 |
The Darkroom
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Really great story. A few, minor grammatical errors, but nothing major. Can't wait to read more! |