| 2014-10-24 00:57:49 |
I Don't Even Know Her Name
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Well structured and intense story, I enjoyed it. |
| 2013-01-26 10:50:38 |
A Tale of Sibling Differences 2 - Killing Louisa
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Part 3! I didn't envisage a part 2 when I wrote the first story. But you never know .. |
| 2013-04-10 22:46:41 |
Tales from a Small Republic - The Desolate Coast
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Unfortunately I lost the fully proof read version when my hard drive expired and I now realise that in this one the spell checker had changed Jak's name to Half or Hall near the end. ... a bit confusing? Sorry ! |
| 2013-04-23 11:31:31 |
Emo Girl
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Excellent story, even if her death was a bit swift at the end. I would have preferred it if she had been just a couple of years older though |
| 2014-02-02 11:17:10 |
The Girl Scout -23 -- RUN BITCH RUN
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Could have been better written in a few places, perhaps more proof reading needed but I did find the ways she was humiliated exciting! I will have to start reading these stories from Part 1. |