| 2014-07-20 17:43:38 |
MY FIANCE, MY MOM, MY SISTER, MY FRIEND - FAMILY FUCK FRENZY CHAPTER 2
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The only thing i didnt like was the changing of the name of the guy at the ranch. In the beginning it was "Joe" then half way thru it was "Jim". Other then that it was a great story. |
| 2014-06-29 13:49:20 |
Road Trip part 12
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U got me stumped as to who trashed Vicki's and Jackie's apartment. Great story btw, I love it. I loved all ur stories so far. |
| 2014-04-29 04:06:55 |
Boy in the grass 48
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I agree great awesome story. The only bad thing I have to say is that it is short, can u make it longer, like type two chapters but post them as one. I might have to copy and paste them to a word document on my desktop and read it all over again that way u can post more of them. lol |
| 2014-04-17 23:21:10 |
Twin sisters abducted and brutally raped
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To tell u the truth, it was a good story and concept but I just couldn't give it a positive or negative rating so I just decided to leave a comment. |
| 2014-06-06 02:11:07 |
Going Home
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Yea I agree, there need to be a part 2. At least tell what happens when they read the note with the presents and at his funeral. I want to know what Beth says and does. The only bad thing i have to say about the story is you kept saying Max instead of Alex. |