I thought this was incredibly good, whether it's accurate or not. What are the tales of the egyptian gods and goddesses, if not made up stories? Most can't prove that they were true. For all we know, your poem is accurate, the one to comment before is just ignorant.
The flow was perfect, in such an imperfect way.
I wish my poems would turn out that nicely, but unfortunately, I am not skilled enough yet I don't think.
Thanks for you comments Mr. Egyptologist. Maybe you are half right and maybe the other half of your comment contradicts itself. Oh, yeah the Egyptian Gods were also not from outer space...hummm. Sometimes things are written just for effect and are not supposed to be totally accurate, as people often expect critical comments to be, so better luck next time.
Intersting poem but the ancient Egyptian gods were not worshipped with fire and blood but rather with incense and flowers. The Greek word 'amen', which means 'let it be' has nothing to do with the Egyptian name Amun or Amen - 'the hidden one'.
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The flow was perfect, in such an imperfect way.
I wish my poems would turn out that nicely, but unfortunately, I am not skilled enough yet I don't think.
Keep writing :D
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