| 2018-04-03 01:13:30 |
The Sting
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I guess the tale scared the waste matter out some of you . Hahahahaha |
| 2018-04-29 11:34:08 |
Me and my uncle wife
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Its a pretty bad attempt, making up words like "Lode" isn't too clever but as a piece written by a sex starved camel jock who has never had sex with a woman I suppose its a reasonable guess, but hey do some research or maybe write about what you know like gay sex with your uncles or fucking camels maybe. How do you fuck a Came? Don't tell me I don't want to know. |
| 2019-01-07 12:25:17 |
THE INDIAN HOUSEWIFE FROM HIGH SOCIETY TO WHORE IN COLONY SERIES
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Its probably a great story but very hard to read with weird punctuation and jumps from one first person to another. With that fixed it could be great. There is a series From High Society to Whore on Literotica if you want inspiration |
| 2019-03-31 10:46:41 |
I Bought a Slave
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Diarrhea and piss might turn you on but it makes me want to vomit. Maybe forget the bodily finctions and concentrate on the fucking and you might get decent reviews |
| 2019-03-31 10:47:34 |
I Bought a Slave
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If you must do piss at lest put it in the description |