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Comments from BashfulScribe
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2018-06-20 21:40:19 | Panopticon | By the way, I apologize for this popping up in the 'last 30 days' header again as if it were new. I just made some slight edits, I didn't mean to be dishonest or desperately scrounge for views or anything. I didn't realize that would make this appear new. |
| 2018-07-02 04:23:45 | Panopticon | I appreciate the feedback and the criticism, I'll keep that in mind when it comes to future works. Thanks. :) |
| 2018-07-07 18:49:44 | Panopticon | To be honest, Mathematician, I think I just write the latter, stories with sex in them. I'd argue that instead of a mianstream erotica author I'm more of a niche guy. I always found the 'if you don't like it don't read it' excuse dismissive but if you prefer sex stories to stories with sex, perhaps I'm not the author for you when you're in the mood. Nevertheless, thanks. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it, Milik, thank you. Coming from a prominent erotica writer like you it means a lot. Although personally I think that all criticism is worth reading - some of it just needs to be taken in perspective. |
| 2018-07-31 07:54:48 | What Kind of Erotic Writer are You? | You're close. QED is used to end (or in more modern contexts, bridge) a proof. I'm using it to say that my earlier question is used to prove the substance behind the question I then ask. It may not be the most perfect way to use it, but I use the question of likening oneself to Tarantino or Tolkien to feed into the more conclusive question. Because the question is rhetorical and conclusive, as far as I understand, my usage is correct, but don't go by me, I've never read your Jack Sparrow story. If that was the most significant thing from this essay to jump out at you, I worry for how boring my essay must come across... |
| 2018-08-28 21:49:21 | Julie (edited) | This story reads very clunkily. You have good ideas here but the short sentence structure doesn't really add much in the way of style. The punctuation is confusingly placed, with half of the dialogue having quotation marks and the other half not for some reason. Your other stories are a lot better than this, although this one isn't exactly bad, per se. I see a lot of promise in your Cheerleader Vote series.I'm frankly confused as to why this one is one of your most popular, though I guess it's because it's locked at a 95% rating at user votes only (which I understand). I would recommend labeling this "(work in progress)" and not "(edited)" because reading this story alone frankly makes it seem like English is not your first language and that you're an amateur to any writing. That on its own is not enough for a review, but your frankly immature attitude towards criticism pushed this to a negative. You're a writer, you need to learn how to deal with unfair/mean criticism effectively. |