| 2015-09-17 14:21:13 |
Best Friends Become More_(1)
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Not as good as your other story, a bit unconvincing; sleeping together and not touching each other? Hmmmm... Also a bit too "chatty" rather than "written" if you get my point. And we non Americans shudder at the "off of" expression. |
| 2015-09-13 11:15:03 |
My Sister Sarah and I
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Great story that sounds like real life; looking forward to continuation. One point though: the hymen is at the INTROITUS, the opening, of the vagina, not 2 inches down inside. Trust the yanks to fuck up reality! They call a vulva a vagina, an arse an ass, like to dip their pricks in the sewer, mutilate their son's dicks, and rearranged the genital structure of their daughters by moving their hymens half way up their slack vaginas. Yeah, reality is rare in the good ole USA. |
| 2015-09-13 11:42:16 |
My Sister Sarah and I - part 2
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Keep this going, buddy . Great storyline, believable, despite what some wankers say. This has great potential, so go for it. |
| 2015-09-13 12:08:33 |
My Sister Sarah and I - Conclusion
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Great story, with a delicious sting at the end, "A Scorpion Tale"!! |
| 2015-09-14 06:47:03 |
Lost Sailor - Chapter 2
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As a former big boat yachtie, I know the feeling; wonderful story. Nothing like being at sea, in the little nooks and crannies along the coast, just used sweat out submerged containers, particularly at night, running under sail at a good 12 - `15 knots. Ahhhh, them was the days! |