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Comments from Impax
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-02-17 22:14:49 | 1 The Van | Nobody can comment on this unless they are registered, sorry folks. Too many idiots advertizing for submissives getting in the way of criticisms, good and bad. I started out thinking that I was writing these stories for myself, and just publishing because they were too good to throw away, but I've thought about it, and these stories as yours as much as they are mine. I'm doing this for the comments as much as anything anymore. If anyone has any topics they like to see me write about, I'd like to try my hand at someone elses idea and see how close to their vision I can get. |
| 2015-02-18 23:07:54 | The Mysterious Device | Please use paragraph breaks. This is a good story, but the one huge block of text makes it difficult on the eyes. Blank lines between each paragraph, and every time a new person speaks. You'll have a lot less idiots bitching at you |
| 2015-02-18 23:00:52 | Common Erotic Mistakes_(0) | My first stories were a real mess. I didn't know about line breaks between paragraphs (I won't even READ a story now if the blocks of text are too big) and that's a common problem I see in here. Also, hardly anyone knows where the hymen is located. If you have a 9" cock, the head of it is going to pop that sucker, not when it's halfway in. |
| 2015-02-18 18:55:40 | Package Deal 2 | Thanks, bud, Good job on this! |
| 2015-02-18 18:05:50 | 6 The Van conclusion | Well thanks! This was originally written as one long piece, but I broke it into chapters because my laptop doesn't want to hold everything in the clipboard. I take great pride in my abaility to spell, and I never learned the names of the call the parts of a sentence; I learned how to write by reading, and I can just spot what looks wrong. Spell checker is pretty awesome, too, because I can bever seem to remember if a word is spelled with a ibiliity, ability, or ebility. |