| 2013-09-22 19:13:07 |
Filled
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I found a couple mistakes when reading it here, oops. She ran around too many corners after leaving her room and going to Scott's, and another place, two sections didn't get pasted together very well. You get what you pay for, I guess. |
| 2013-09-22 22:52:09 |
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Erm, yeah. Sorry you didn't like the end. I've re-read ot and you're right. That isn't an ending, so I'm continuing the tale, and taking more time with it. |
| 2013-10-01 14:02:23 |
The Package_(1)
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Nice concept. Maybe the dong was bugged, and the "deliveryman" could be here to blackmail them into putting out? |
| 2013-11-04 01:01:58 |
My 3 Sluts Part 1
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Not even going to try to read one paragraph stories. Every time a new person speaks, they get a paragraph break, and it is much easier to read with a blank line between paragraphs. |
| 2013-12-24 17:20:19 |
Slave for a Day_(0)
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I tried to. Also, the second chapter of this story won't post. Weird. |