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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-05 10:45:45 | It happened on vacation ( and continued at home) revied and reposted. pt 5 thru 8 | "It Happened On Vacation And Continued At Home (Revised) Parts 5 Through 8:" - Unnamed Brother and Unnamed Sister and Unnamed Mother, Unnamed Girlfriend, and Unnamed 'Cousin':". The writer of this piece of work can never become ardent or accomplished unless a number of basic rules are adhered to. All the characters must have names!! Through the new Revised Chapters 1 and 2 (the original first eight (8) "mini-Parts") there is NOT one named individual, none, nil, nada, zero--out of at least six (6) DIFFERENT individuals!! The first Revised Chapter 1 is a good start, being good, rather smooth, lots of love and emotions between the unnamed brother and unnamed sister. This second Revised Chapter 2, the story fast becomes a 'stroke' story with shit-fucking; a great amount of time devoted to that one aspect! The unnamed brother goes immediately from one pussy to another and another, bang, bang, bang.......non-stop!! Romance/Incest stories and Stroke stories do not mix well. |
| 2014-04-13 14:51:33 | 3013: Anna's First Perfomance | "3013 - Anna's First Performance - Anna - ("Daughter) Anna is due to give her solo performance of losing her virginity, to a number of around a dozen older teen, adolescent and young males! A national ordinance requires the acts to tke place, and young girls lose the maidenhead to God only knows. The story ends before the performance occurs so the reader is left to wonder the outcome, and the joy or not of her entry into "womanhood"! |
| 2013-09-12 02:19:28 | A Lifelong Affair pt. 3 | "A Lifelong Affair Pt. 03" - Kevin and Lilly - (Brother and Sister) This chapter is like two ships passing in the night--kind of like the lights were blinked as an acknowledgement of their presence, and then they continued on as if they were destined to bigger and better things separately in other parts of the world!! If one were blindfolded and sauntered up to Chapters 02 versus Chapter 03, and read them without any knowledge that Chapter 03 is a continuation of Chapter 02, the reader would NEVER have any inkling, any feeling, any consideration the two chapters were related, the reader would never know. It's as if the two chapters are TOTALLY different as to the characters, as to the content and the context of the two stories, as if there is any connection whatsoever!! This chapter is a major disapointment to this reader, as to the direction taken in the lives of Kevin and Lilly!!!!! It's as if they had NO LIFE together previously, and definitely NO LOVE FOR EACH OTHER! Bu |
| 2013-09-12 03:47:24 | Breaking Brooke | "Breaking Brooke" - Brooke nd Unnamed Dad - (Daugher and Father) For a twelve year old daughter to be as "mature" for her age, especially concerning her questioning sexual feelings and methods and her determination to explore and find out with her Dad is a most worthy endeavor for her!! Though it was not discussed, but at her age it is probable that she is not yet having her period, and therefore maybe not fertile enough to become pregnant!! It is, however, an issue the writer should make a matter to include into the context of future stories. Brooke, though young, is full of questions...maybe because of her three sisters. She seems to have given her intended sexual activity much thought and consideration. The story is quite exotic and handled with touches of sensuality by her father--and the writer!! Brooke is the "enticer in charge", and leaves her father no doubt as to her intentions!! Great effort, great story and aptly constructed!!! |
| 2014-12-30 08:09:04 | A Daddy's Needs | "A Daddy's Needs - Ch. 01" - Twenty-eight Year Old Unnamed Divorced Father of Two Natural Daughters, Twelve Year Old Kylie and Ten Year Old Katie; And Lizzie, The Four Year Old Daughter of Unnamed Daddy's Divorced and Now Deceased Ex-wife Lisa--The Mother of Kylie and Katie. The story in context, theme and the unnamed daddy's narration of the story are superb!! The story does seem to be rushed, as if in a hurry to finish it, leaving many details and descriptions, especially after the fire that killed his ex-wife Lisa, her second husband, and both his parents and ex-wife's parents. The story could use lots of tenderness (and not rape) due to the love of his three girls for him and each other and also their ages! Sensuality and respect is paramount to a story of this magnitude, scope and concept! The incestual consummation and probable pregnancy of his daughter Kylie (and possibly Katie) deserves parental maturity, respect and honor of their feelings toward their daddy!! |