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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-11-01 23:42:15 | it happned on vacation pt 2 | "It Happened On Vacation Part 2" - Unnamed Brother and Unnamed Sister Reminder: In Part 1, I did mention the character's as being unidentified (nameless, as in faceless, as in innate objections, etc); again, should the writer/author read these comments, PLEASE name and identify each and all characters!!! It puts the character into perspective, the reader can, with their own imagination, visualize each character, and it puts the story on a level above elementary!!! Otherwise, the sentences are TOO LONG, without periods, or commas, or semicolons, etc. Paragraphs every eight to ten sentences is a MUST necessity!!! The Story context has merit and possibilities, but too many basic tenets of writing and grammar are ignored, inadverent;y or not, and the content and theme of the story suffers! At this point I will struggle to read through each part to the last. I'm not sure how far I'll get, but I will make a good faith effort to proceed through at least a couple more chapters! |
| 2013-11-02 00:03:01 | it happened on vacation (and continued at home) pt 3 | "It Happened On Vacation Part 3" - Unnamed Brother and Unnamed Sister The writing, with just a small amount of punctuation thrown in, seems to have creeped sparringly into the body of the story--there's hope yet!! The writer could add doses and ingredients of foreplay, slowing the immediate jumping each other's "bones" into more sensual and tenderness of the caring as lovers!! |
| 2013-11-02 18:42:10 | Mary had a Hot Ram | "Mary Had A Hot Ram" - Mary and Rocky, Bess and Ringo, and Lulu May and Old Blue - (Teen Female and Male Sheep, Mary's Mother and Bull Cow, and Teen Female Friend and Sheepdog) Teenager's have such capacity to observe, learn, retain, and put to such honest and practical uses that is amazes the adult mind. Even Mary's mother Bess has absolute knowledge and wherewithal to negate her husband's bearly monthly fucking that Bess has adapted herself sexually to the farm's big bull Ringo and accomodated the bull's massive cock and cumloads with the greatest of ease! This story contains lots of witticsm and humor, pornographic inneuendo and sexual acuity and humor!! Mary and her male sheep Rocky, Bess and her male cow Ringo, and Mary's friend Lulu May and her male sheepdog Old Blue, add so much spice and titillation that the story illicts smiles and tingles to the reader perusing the wanton tale of bestiality!! Great stuff, and well presented with clarity and visualization images!! |
| 2013-11-04 04:07:38 | Filmed with Dogs | "Filmed With Dogs" - Charlotte and Khan, Felicia and Craig, and George - (Wife and Doberman, Trainer and Her Brother, and Husband of Charlotte) Without reservation I must say the owner/writer of this story is talented with a devious, mysterious and wicked mind. Of course, being the prodigy of the original writer, Felicia is one more weird and perverted person (male of female)!! However, "she" loves her brother Craig, and adores the big dog-dick of her Doberman Khan!! For Felicia to have the ability and talent to train Charlotte with[n a week is an absolute achievement! This story probably boggles the mind of the majority of readers, including others. To achimvw's comment 08-03-2011, the issuer of this story to XNXX Website, DISCLAIMED--at the outset--he (or she) IS NOT the author of this story!!!!! |
| 2013-11-06 00:35:37 | Tubing | "Tubing" - John and Lindsey Burke - (Father and Daughter) Strange, that thirteen year old daughter Lindsey can just take alll of her father John's dick so fucking comfortably, bouncing and tossing together on a tube down a river rapids, and her father doesn't question her, nor himself, as to why she is so adept and accomplished fucking him. Of course, it is father John's luck that he does get to fuck his daughter at her emergence into her teen years, even though he didn't have the pleasure of taking her virginity. It would serve him right to have planted twin babies in her nubile, fertile pussy!!! |