| 2012-04-11 11:53:18 |
Persuading the Girl Next Door 1
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Yes, more, please. This tale is far from finished |
| 2012-04-17 12:03:16 |
Kissin Cousins
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I gave it a pos vote, but only for the beginning. It's like you spent a couple of days writing the first part, but them you got in a hurry and just finished it all in one big paragraph to get it over with. My friend, these stories aren't something to "get done with." We read them because we have an excess of time, an interest in the subject, and for you to get lazy on us like that is kind of a slap in the face with the big hand of reality. Please don't do it again. You have a lot of talent; please don't take any more shortcuts and cheat everyone involved, including the characters you made us care about. |
| 2012-04-29 23:14:59 |
Blind Date_(4)
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Okay, I'm going to do my best not to let this guy turn into an asshole the way several of my other leading men have done. I'm really a nice guy, honest, I don't know why I keep letting the dark side out. |
| 2012-05-01 02:04:16 |
Blind Date_(4)
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Part two is nearly done. It will be up later this week. I have time to write again, FINALLY!! Whoo hoo!! |
| 2012-05-01 18:53:45 |
A Game of Inches - Part Five
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these are some of the best stories on this whole site. Thanks for keeping them up, and I'm reading them for the incredible story lines more than the sex. This could pass for a real book if you ever wanted to publish it. |