| 2020-09-29 08:00:27 |
The Sexy Story of Leanna (Part Three)
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My suggestion is to break up some of these paragraphs to make it reader friendly. |
| 2020-09-29 11:06:08 |
Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 3
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My kind of story. Love it. |
| 2020-09-30 05:14:05 |
Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 4
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Another well written chapter. I do agree with some of the comments regarding the over telling of what transpires in the game without mentioning what game it is. My best guess would be Super Smash Bros. Other than that it's a definite positive rating in my book. |
| 2020-10-01 20:14:35 |
Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 5
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Another great chapter. Very entertaining. On to the next. |
| 2020-10-02 00:32:42 |
Maria's Favor to a Geek - Chapter 6
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I love these type of stories. A few grammatical errors but nonetheless a terrific story as usual. On to the next chapter. |