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Comments from throatHER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-06-04 02:35:19 | Inviting the new neighbors to a BBQ - 5 (Repost) | This series hits very close to home for me. Massive thumbs up from me!! Great job! |
| 2021-07-11 21:21:08 | My Baby Sister's BFF | You captured the essence of the conflict older men deal with predatory younger females. Nicely done. Well told story. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| 2021-08-25 18:14:04 | At Your Service | Absolutely loved, loved, loved the story! It had an old Patrick Dempsey movie "Loverboy" vibe to it. This deserves a sequel, for sure. The type of story where you care about the characters in it. My only critique which is very minor was sometimes I had to read a few sentences twice to find out who's point of view it was. But like I said very, very minor. Bravo! |
| 2021-08-27 15:30:52 | Journey into Cheating - Part 3 (My obsession with my boyfriend's dad) | Fantastic piece of writing. This story needs to be higher rated than it is. |
| 2021-09-19 08:11:31 | Alex and Alaina become more than just neighbors | Overall, it's a good story. But it needs proofreading. You have quite a few errors grammatically which can sometimes make it a tough read, especially with how long it is. I am interested in where you take this if you decide to continue. Thumbs up from me! |